Wednesday, July 23, 2014

The persona I attempted creating for my essay on Misconceptions About Ballroom Dancing, was drawn from my own personal experiences. I haven't been in the 'dancing business' for very long, maybe about two and a half years. But in that short amount of time, I have come to find it is a very fun sport, if you will. By creating this paper, I wish it to open individuals eyes on the wonderful idea of ballroom dancing. All it takes, essentially, is for one person to announce an untruthful thing and persuade the minds on many. With this essay, I had hoped to reverse that.

2 comments:

  1. Two and a half years isn't very long? You just weren't very invested or interested in it. Your persona is you? You didn't explain the persona at all, or how you will use it. It is not really a sport, but it is a fun activity and good skill to have.

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  2. I like your goal of opening up the eyes of young individuals today to the idea of ballroom dancing. I personally enjoy ballroom dancing. It is both fun and romantic as well as a productive way to exercise. However, I am not sure if I understand what persona you were trying to create in your paper. Was your persona supposed to be someone similar to you with your ballroom dancing experience.

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